Use "Grabber" Headline and Lead

by Shel Horowitz
(Hadley, MA USA)

Shel's most recent book, Guerrilla Marketing Goes Green

Shel's most recent book, Guerrilla Marketing Goes Green

Shel's most recent book, Guerrilla Marketing Goes Green Book Marketing and Publishing Consultant Shel Horowitz

With thousands of books published every DAY, it's no longer enough to say that you have a new book. Instead, your headline and lead have to talk about "the story behind the story": often involving pain points or greed points.

When a client hired me to write a press release for a book on electronic privacy, I DIDN'T use a headline like "Electronic Privacy Expert Releases New Book" (snore!). Instead, I went with "It's 10 O'Clock: Do You Know Where Your Credit History Is?" And the lead went on to talk about how your sensitive personal information could be "vacationing" in large corporate databanks. The book showed up around the third paragraph.

For fiction, you can focus on the entertainment value, and sometimes the setting can help. Here's one I did for another client: "Sex, Power, Environmental Catastrophe and Immortality in New York: Novel Weaves a Twisted Web."

--Shel Horowitz, book marketing consultant and copywriter and author of eight books including Grassroots Marketing for Authors and Publishers

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"Grabber" headline and lead NEW
by: Shel Horowitz - Green/Ethical Marketer

You're very welcome. And if you get stuck, I write press releases at very reasonable cost.

Jun 18, 2012
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Awesome Tips! NEW
by: Heather Hart

Wow, Shel! These are some great tips for writing attention grabbing headline tips! I do know that some of the press release distribution sites require you to state the company name, can’t use pronouns, or have other content qualifications that these titles wouldn’t meet, but for the ones that aren’t as strict, these would be awesome! I’m thinking that even if they do require the company name you could weave it into the end; i.e., “…New Novel from Author Name Weaves a Twisted Web.”

Thanks for sharing! This has been something that I knew I needed to be working on and you may have just helped me break through the barrier I was hitting.

~Heather Hart

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